not a bad job
Good jorb. It's top 5able. I noticed a bunch of spelling mistakes and I think it was sloppy at times. I know how hard it is to flash if you aren't super 1337sk33t like Adam Phillips so i'll give you props for dedication. Voice overs were alright, if you're going to do a lot of flashing i'd consider paying for a good quality mic. Your style isn't particularily new or anything, DBZ style animation and the story's based on Final Fantasy. I don't really have much to say besides this, you know what it would take to get your work on the front page. I'm not sure if you take a lot of time on your story boards, but this will greaty increase the quality of your work.