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[Valor: Ep. 1]

good job

nice job, but theres just a few tips i think might help you.
1) do it much more frame by frame and much less dead scenes (where no one moves) you can do dead scenes but you need you have to do camera changes. It is just voices on picture basicly
2) take more time when doing the lip sync godly lip sync is wicked. Just makign it a graphic object and it going over and over is gay
3) Take more time in your scenes that you make (your savages scenes were cool the dancing and the fire very nice combination)
4) Do a little bit more editing, there is a few parts where a little bit of editing would make things a lot nicer.
5) try to do a little less tweaning like I said above (more animation) that would greatly increase your flow of the movie and the aura.

well gl in your next episode, I imagine it wil be very good and i hope 2 see it. BTW: Dont use the same character over and over and over and over in every scene not changing anything, that just shows lazyness.

[WT, then some (Clay)]

oh man GJ!

wow, that is some of the best claymation i have ever seen. GJ Man, GJ. The endings hillarious. I recently have worked on a little claymation and I know just how fuckin hard it is to do.
BTW: Very nice job on the voices very clear.

["Girls"]

hahaha yah...

I understand, its not to that extreme obviously but still woman in general can be unforward :S its like tryin 2 figure out a maze. see this is what happens when you give them the power to vote they just walk all over you ^^ hehe

[OLD:quest to find luigi]

not bad

just a little FYI not every 1 reads 1 word a minute.

fdigital responds:

sorry i didn't try to in my continued version il make it faster!

[Reminiscence]

Good start

im gonna give a constructive review instead of being a jerk and said i think it sucked.
1) the little things make a big difference in the movie, for example when going in through the bars in the beginning scene make him breath, and make him get larger, you dont zoom in and make the bars get bigger and not the person for example.
2) when making him flip, dont just do a flipping motion tween, it really gives a crappy affect, do it frame by fame, yes it is harder, but it looks so much nicer.
3) Maybe, give more of a story behind your animation, and make it a little longer. For example "The mass murder leather face, locked in his jail cell would take no more, today, he would break free" accept with a less gay dialogue.
4) You did a very good job of making mood, but maybe you should give more detail in his surroundings, perhaps, cracks in the walls, cracked bar cells.

I hope my little information helped a little, and i didnt suond like an ass criticizing your movie. I really liked it. I hope your series does very well and the best of luck with any other animations you do in the near future.

[Resident Evil 2.9]

OHGOD! THAT WAS AWESOME :D

Gj man i dunno you replaced crappy animation with the best of humour. Oh god i have never lauffed that much before. Good job man... good job... *tear* so funny. Cant wait to see your otehr work, good luk on your next animation. You have talent ;D

[Mythology]

awesome.

I loved that. Like damarus said the lack of sound effects made it seem more epic. Personally if you would of put sound effekts it would of just made it cheezy because I doubt very many things could of fit the situation. I like your style. I cant wait to see the next animation from you. I personally hope this gets some sort of an award. This was just plain awesome.

[Sword Two]

That was awesoem gj

I loved that. What an awesome idea. Woulda been better if it was longer and the powers were used against like some mega boss but either way it was still awesome. gj man, cant wait till your next submission.

[Xtreme Zero]

Not bad ezily improved

Not a bad movie, you have potential in quality sprites. If you added music, maybe did some shitty voice overs it would be a lot better. Music = 10x as good. In truth it was boring. GJ on your next project though. ^^

Galan0 responds:

heh heh, thanks. (by the way, my voice sounds like shit XD)