I dislike bad voice overs
I think that you spent some time on this. The lack of background, and the crappy mic make it for a hard to watch flash. There was some bad lip syncing as well.
I had a muffin before I watched this so you will get a 2.
You look like you got some potential because I seen some camera techniques used at the end and some sort of comedic capacity what with the bunny and Japan and stuff.
I'll look out for your new work.
I too dislike bad voice overs. YOU SIR, are a muffin eater of the first class. The fact that you'll be seeing them makes me suddenly work harder...tis odd
I love Gary Bucey
I found the commentary funnier than the actual comic-esque video. I think that the characters are play well off each other and I enjoyed it and wanted to see what happened next. I think your writing is intelligent and the whole thing was all around really stupid like any good NG flash should be. Get a really hard core super extreme intro that's the exact opposite of the flash with rabbits shooting lazers out of their eyes. Yeah. Lazers.
not a bad job
Good jorb. It's top 5able. I noticed a bunch of spelling mistakes and I think it was sloppy at times. I know how hard it is to flash if you aren't super 1337sk33t like Adam Phillips so i'll give you props for dedication. Voice overs were alright, if you're going to do a lot of flashing i'd consider paying for a good quality mic. Your style isn't particularily new or anything, DBZ style animation and the story's based on Final Fantasy. I don't really have much to say besides this, you know what it would take to get your work on the front page. I'm not sure if you take a lot of time on your story boards, but this will greaty increase the quality of your work.
ty for ur review xDDD
not my kind of movie
I thought it was alright, animation wise. The beginning had some good looking scenes and i thought that the smoke rings that were created by actionscript and used as an ambient 3/4's of the way throughout the movie were pretty neat. I won't try to claim that I understand it. Enjoying a moment, class, exhaleing a moment, contrasted sophistication. I think it was flat as far as dynamic scenes go. The camera never really changed and you only saw one side of your character. I don't like smoking either :p good job though, keep up the work.
super sweet animation
I liked it, no color, and I would of really loved to of seen some sword play, but that is probably when I would of pulled out my gun. One thing to consider, using audio from the audio portal.
tight
You did a really good job animating them. Looks good. Good voice over as well, considering who you're trying to cover here.
Kind of scary
I could give this a 10 because I know it took a decent amount of effort, but I will give you a 5. I liked it, and I thought it was actually scary to an extent because that's kind of what a scary dream consists of and it reminds me that I have many more dreams to go through.
I think that certain still scenes where there's only one image in the frame you didn't really take any time to put in any detail or realism into it, such as the bed and beside area, or the hallway and its dimensions. The beginning scenes were very descriptive with the railcars. Good work altogether.
Yeah,I know.That is why there was a deadline for the movie,plus I was very busy,and couldn't totally give my time to animating this.I first wanted to do the whole story in one piece ,but again,the deadline,so I split it into 3 parts.
perty good.
It was good, I liked your use of camera play, and good voice acting. Like, when the door was transparent, that was nice. One thing though, he should of fucked some stuff up with his reaping stick. Little girl! Head chopped off. Grandma, dead! but that's just me. Pretty neat.
Yeah haha it is just you...I could of done that but it's just not appropriate for that flash. Maybe some other time.
yeaaah
better than family channel.
Cool
Needs a pre-loader, but other than that really cool. You have a good understanding of human figure, very smooth. Good job.
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