THIS WAS SO BAD IT SUCKED IT WAS HORRIBLE
THIS WAS SO BAD IT SUCKED IT WAS HORRIBLE
Aw damn. Now I feel sad. I might consider suicide
Too short? It's five minutes long and I think it's too short. Weird, it's nice, but I feel liek the first five minutes is just an eventual build up to something.
sweet
ya that totally was like, you know, something. IT WASNT SO BAD I HATE IT, but at the same time, I don't want to show it to my friends because it really doesn't go anywhere.
its okay i hate it
funkin rainy sweet dips
help with finishing the track:
vocals, some damsy delicate thing singing soft nothings over top. mr funk needs a girl to be serenading the listener. he's going to town to get her some flowers.
"all these days I have been screaming, crying, kicking, I feel like I am dying, oh baby, you are so shady, Mr Funk why can't you play the game fair-lee, you're such a party stopper but you don't holler mr funk you soon will be a gonner"
lyrics something like that.
intro the beat longer, the beat itself is fine enough, and you kick in a chorus too quickly.
A really long piano solo near the end, accentuated over the beat as opposed to layered underneath.
maybe a solid synth to break everything up. something that goes underneath everything.
#ideas
sucks cuz u can't download it and play it on the mp3 player
but otherwise funtastic
amazing. the only thing it is missing is some sort of breakdown into silence? like, a breakdown to a buildup, you know? this is a really good track, I listened to it front to back and I especially liked the eventual guitar riffs at the end, it really brought it all together. great work. fav'd / download'd
Glad you dig it pal! Thanks for faving it. Rock on!
zelda ftw
classy beast
hiya
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