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THIS WAS SO BAD IT SUCKED IT WAS HORRIBLE

Cursedsnake responds:

Aw damn. Now I feel sad. I might consider suicide

Too short? It's five minutes long and I think it's too short. Weird, it's nice, but I feel liek the first five minutes is just an eventual build up to something.

sweet

ya that totally was like, you know, something. IT WASNT SO BAD I HATE IT, but at the same time, I don't want to show it to my friends because it really doesn't go anywhere.

Omnivore responds:

its okay i hate it

funkin rainy sweet dips

help with finishing the track:

vocals, some damsy delicate thing singing soft nothings over top. mr funk needs a girl to be serenading the listener. he's going to town to get her some flowers.

"all these days I have been screaming, crying, kicking, I feel like I am dying, oh baby, you are so shady, Mr Funk why can't you play the game fair-lee, you're such a party stopper but you don't holler mr funk you soon will be a gonner"

lyrics something like that.

intro the beat longer, the beat itself is fine enough, and you kick in a chorus too quickly.

A really long piano solo near the end, accentuated over the beat as opposed to layered underneath.

maybe a solid synth to break everything up. something that goes underneath everything.

#ideas

sucks cuz u can't download it and play it on the mp3 player

but otherwise funtastic

amazing. the only thing it is missing is some sort of breakdown into silence? like, a breakdown to a buildup, you know? this is a really good track, I listened to it front to back and I especially liked the eventual guitar riffs at the end, it really brought it all together. great work. fav'd / download'd

DanJohansen responds:

Glad you dig it pal! Thanks for faving it. Rock on!

zelda ftw

classy beast

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